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07/15/2006 11:40:25 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Hello! Congratulations on your nice placement in the Flower challenge. This is, of course, a striking image, and immediately engendered strong emotions from your commentors.
Technically, and compositionally, in my opinion, it's just fine. sure it's bold and the colors almost hurt, but that's what you wanted and that's what you achieved. I very much like the way you made the stems cross on the two lilies. That added an extra thoughtful touch to the image.
I will point out that the lighting on the lavender background is very slightly uneven (but you knew that) and the flowers have a slight indication of oversharpening, at least on my monitor. But those are pickings of nits, and just something to do to keep my fingers occupied while on the keyboard.
In any event, nice image, and I'm very pleased to have the chance to examine it more closely.
Keep up the good work.
Alice |
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07/10/2006 07:04:51 AM |
| Carl - great finish in a very tough challenge, and a new pic on your top row, too! Very unique and lovely presentation - and in reading your notes, took a lot of work, too. |
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07/09/2006 11:47:34 PM |
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07/09/2006 10:25:30 PM |
| one of my favorites this challenge -- bold still life combines contemporary elements into a crisp composition |
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07/09/2006 09:14:06 PM |
| This is very creative, a great effort, I love the colors, one of my favorites in this challenge. Good luck. |
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07/08/2006 11:08:10 PM |
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07/08/2006 09:54:03 PM |
| Great shot here. The flowers alone are striking, but with that purple background, they have even more eye appeal. Very artistically done! |
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07/08/2006 08:04:29 PM |
| no room to judge..however, i LOVE this shot, except for the yellow inner border..just seems to detract for me...but what do i kknow...good luck 9* |
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07/08/2006 07:22:11 AM |
| Excellent composition, and also a very good image here as well..... |
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07/08/2006 12:15:30 AM |
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07/07/2006 03:39:58 PM |
| great composition, just something about the glass, i dont know |
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07/06/2006 11:58:43 PM |
| Fantastic, what an engaging and creative composition! |
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07/06/2006 01:04:09 PM |
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07/05/2006 10:55:36 AM |
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07/05/2006 12:24:31 AM |
| Love it. Love the perspective. |
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07/04/2006 04:33:14 PM |
| 3 - The lilies are beautiful, however in my opinion this beauty gets lost in your choice of background(s), framing, lighting and the reflection off the glass/vase. The concept of squeezing them into the neck of the vase/bottle/glass could work, but it looks too harsh and 'stiff' as is. Again, the choice of both colors in the background as well as shapes, coupled with the hard framing, detracts overall from the potential in this shot, in my opinion. A variation in angle/perspective and lighting, would also likely have helped. |
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07/04/2006 02:53:43 PM |
| Really like the colours and symmetry |
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07/03/2006 11:24:07 PM |
| interesting setup. good choice of vase and background. |
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07/03/2006 09:26:15 PM |
| i think i would have like this better without the purple square backdrop. |
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07/03/2006 06:19:16 PM |
| The lilies are very pretty but I am not sure about that purple square in the background. I think the image would have been stronger with an all black background. |
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07/03/2006 02:03:27 AM |
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