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06/15/2006 11:26:57 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: I like your focus, including a great depth of field that goes beyond the clouds and nicely exposes the stars in focus. I also like the time of exposure here, catching the ever so slight drifting of the clouds.
Lighting: You did a very nice job in an often difficult, low light condition. You were able to keep the stars and the cloud highlights from losing detail, while also capturing a long enough exposure to paint a very nice red coloring on the cliff.
Composition/Content: This is the one area that I do believe that the original was better. This one is interesting from a minimalist viewpoint, but I find myself feeling like the cliff was accidentally chopped off. I'd really like to see more of it, as the color complements the sky very nicely.
My Opinion: The two shots are vastly different in content and execution. I, against the opinion of the voters, do not see this one as far superior to the original. Rather, I believe that this one scored pretty close to its deserved potential, whereas the initial entry was actually much better than the voters gave it credit.
Eric
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06/13/2006 12:36:25 AM |
| Very nice, Jon. I had this one rated pretty high! Good work. |
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06/12/2006 11:16:01 PM |
| the stars are really cool! |
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06/11/2006 11:25:50 PM |
| Extraordinary!! Love the stars. 10 |
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06/11/2006 01:43:14 PM |
| I have no idea what the original shot looks like, but this one is wonderful. |
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06/10/2006 12:17:33 AM |
| Gorgeous...maybe up the blues towards the top of the image a bit. |
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06/06/2006 02:37:32 PM |
| raise contrast and gamma, and it should get a much stronger "night" feel, cause until u see that stars, it looks like day |
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06/06/2006 12:59:19 PM |
| Wow! This is spectacular! The subject is clearly that aMAZING sky with all the stars sprinkled throughout. . .but the cliff and the barren tree are the perfect thing to add bold interest. This is great, and one of my favorites so far!! |
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06/06/2006 09:04:46 AM |
| wow...haven't seen the original, but this looks fantastic and I hope you do well with this, good luck |
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06/06/2006 08:00:19 AM |
| I like it -- the stars in a blue sky ... beautiful. |
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