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06/13/2006 10:15:33 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Very nice technical work with this image. The ghosting is more effective here with a better play into the image. This feels better than the standing position in the original.
Lighting: The lighting is also better in this image. The side of the building was a bit blown in the original. Not so here. I also like the individual lights that you captured.
Composition/Content: This is where I really like the original. Sure, you took the pole out of your head, but the track played an integral part of the last image. It served well to pull the viewer deep into the image.
My Opinion: I like it, but I still prefer the original. This is a better shot from a technical standpoint, but the composition of the original is better. That is where the voters noticed, I believe.
Eric
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06/13/2006 01:15:37 AM |
| It's FAR better than the original. Shows how tough the DPC crowds are getting! Good work :) |
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06/10/2006 07:44:59 PM |
| Wonderful semi exposure work. Tells a story. |
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06/07/2006 04:07:17 PM |
| Clarksville, TN? sure looks like it from what I remember of it. |
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