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10/06/2006 01:15:55 PM |
Beautiful model... and very natural in front of the lens.. I love her eyes..
What attracted me to this photo is the way you control the lighting.. It's perfect..
I would like to comment on the angle of the shot.. Her raised hand makes shows much of her biceps. this increases the size of her torso in a manly way. I'm sure she's much slimer in person, thus this photo makes her look big (not in a good way)
A slit tilt of angle may do the trick.
But still a good take |
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09/14/2006 04:56:03 AM |
| I happened to find these photos while following your link in the self-portrait group. I didn't happen to catch them during the Beatles challenge, but I must say your finish at 38 was good, but you deserved even better IMHO. They top some ahead of you as far as I am concerned. I love the lighting. The clarity and detail, especially in her hair, is excellent. Tones are near perfect as you have left detail visible in a dark dress while still doing justice to her complextion. Nice composition too. Well done. If I had voted in that challenge you would have "earned" and received a 9 or 10 from me. |
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07/27/2006 01:02:28 PM |
| Very Nice! Really love this shot, the soft focus works great with her skin and hair. IMHO i REALLY wish the focus of the photo was drawn a little more twards her eyes, i just feel with everything done so great here, i really expected the eyes to grab my attention on my first look. Very Nice though, and sorry if i was a little too picky ;-) |
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06/07/2006 09:46:46 AM |
| Now I recognize the model! ;-) Great shot - one of the best from your shoot. I really like the black background and darker tones/mood. |
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06/07/2006 03:04:54 AM |
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06/06/2006 06:08:40 PM |
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06/06/2006 05:16:52 PM |
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06/05/2006 03:34:29 AM |
| and she is lovely, lovely Rita! really nice pose and portrait |
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06/04/2006 11:18:28 PM |
| nice lighting and tone. It's easier to get a great photograph when you have an exceptional subject to shoot |
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06/04/2006 03:40:05 PM |
| Beautiful lighting as well as an equally beautiful model. You really made the hair very attractive! My only criticizm would be to maybe clone some areas of her armpit there to make it a little more flattering. |
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06/04/2006 03:39:05 PM |
| A very interesting study with a lovely subject. I would have explored a slight change of body angle so as to reduce the apparant false mass that the raised shoulder has produced in conjuction with the style of attire as it sweeps down. Otherwise, the model has an arresting and very expressive face. Bump. |
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06/03/2006 11:01:42 PM |
| "WOW" factor with this portrait...... A truely great image..... |
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06/03/2006 05:10:17 PM |
| Lovely Rita, lovely picture. |
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06/02/2006 08:08:21 PM |
| Lovely indeed! In fact it is almost perfect. I see some bright highlights on her left arm between her elbow and her finger tips I would like to tone down just a bit. If they could match the highlights on her right hand, I think it would improve the image. Still among my favorites this challenge. Well done! |
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06/02/2006 12:00:24 PM |
| Lovely pose and expression |
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06/01/2006 11:39:41 AM |
| Lovely light-maybe a bit more on her face. Pretty. |
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06/01/2006 07:11:18 AM |
Meter Maid? Doesn't look like any I've ever come across. Surely she should have a uniform on?
Great image though - I can't fault the lighting and the pose is lovely. |
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06/01/2006 03:29:55 AM |
| I love the pose and the picture, but there is a bit of a dark patch under her arm which I find distracting. |
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05/31/2006 09:29:33 PM |
| Wonderful model, well shot. Great eyes, skin tone, pose. |
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05/31/2006 05:24:59 PM |
Very nicely posed and light. Great catchlights. The only thing I'm unsure about is the dark dress against the black background. Looks unbalanced somehow.
TC |
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05/31/2006 03:34:40 PM |
| I'll bet this would be a super sweet b and W too. Nice job, you definately nailed a good'n. |
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05/31/2006 12:49:00 PM |
| Nice portrait, but her facial features could be a tad sharper. |
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05/31/2006 11:47:18 AM |
Where's the meter. ;~D
Lovely lighting and fun coquette-ish pose. Great use of black dress and black background. Nice framing. |
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05/31/2006 11:39:18 AM |
| Lighting, pose, and color are all technically perfect. Her pose and eyes have a come hither look that would entice a man to ask her for tea and dinner - but I think this lovely portrait could have established a stronger connection to the Beatles song if you had the model wearing a police/meter maid hat. |
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05/31/2006 04:36:54 AM |
Standing by a parking meter,
When I caught a glimpse of Rita,
Filling in a ticket in her little white book... |
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05/31/2006 03:02:54 AM |
| What, no meter maid outfit?? ;-) Lovely indeed. Great lighting. Not fond of the "smell the armpit" pose though. Probably just me - you obviously appear to know what you're doing. |
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