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Challenge: Rhythm II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF 100mm f/2.8 USM Macro
Location: My bedroom
Date: May 1, 2006
Aperture: f/4
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Abstract, Macro
Date Uploaded: May 1, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 26 out of 208
Avg (all users): 6.1681
Avg (commenters): 6.6429
Avg (participants): 5.8590
Avg (non-participants): 6.3188
Views since voting: 1529
Views during voting: 329
Votes: 238
Comments: 17
Favorites: 3 (view)

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 05/14/2006 11:01:36 PM
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

My first impression of this is that it is a very clean, eye-pleasing image.

Compositionally, it has some interest with the "flowing" left to right, and that being almost, but not quite, exactly "set up" by the lighting (?) in the background.

I also like the "stacking" of the grays. It gives it a graduated feeling, and makes it feel more stable on teh bottom of the shot.

The only "nitpick" I can find, is that it is a bit "flat" in subject. No pun intended. There is little or no feeling of depth to it. Whilst that may have very well been your intention (and I honestly think it sorta works here), the voter's may have been a bit put off by that (but with a score of 6.1ish, it's nothing to be ashamed of. :) )

Good work, and best wishes in future challenges.
karmat
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/09/2006 12:20:37 PM
Nicely seen and executed. Great abstract.
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 05/09/2006 07:57:24 AM
nice lines and muted tones.
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 05/07/2006 10:06:22 PM
I'm not sure that I like the background brighter than the main subject (which I DO like).
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 05/06/2006 08:22:16 PM
Could use some dark balance in the lower half. Very similar to Kiwiness entry in the abstract challenge.
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 05/06/2006 01:06:23 AM
Likt it, very nice soft colours.
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 05/06/2006 12:23:46 AM
Nice tones and Composition.
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 05/05/2006 09:04:13 AM
Well done!
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 05/05/2006 08:09:37 AM
nice watch the lighting
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 05/04/2006 07:14:15 PM
very soft... love it
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 05/04/2006 04:49:21 AM
more "melody" than "rhythm", besides of that quite nice except for the crop at bottom, the downmost sheet should be in or out completely
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 05/04/2006 01:17:19 AM
Great job here...love what's going on in the background...wonderful
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 05/03/2006 05:38:28 PM
Difficult to set it all up and the lighting too isn't it :) It turned out well though.
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 05/03/2006 11:59:32 AM
elegant photo!!
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 05/03/2006 10:25:08 AM
Very nice, reminds me of this image:
//www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=291266
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 05/03/2006 06:28:31 AM
it's a bit dull I'm afraid
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 05/03/2006 04:41:55 AM
repetition with variation - interpret s the challenge effectively...
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