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Challenge: Rhythm II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF 17-40mm f/4L USM
Location: Manila, Philippines
Date: Apr 28, 2006
Aperture: f4.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/200sec
Galleries: Interior, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Apr 28, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 125 out of 208
Avg (all users): 5.3641
Avg (commenters): 5.5714
Avg (participants): 5.1014
Avg (non-participants): 5.4865
Views since voting: 730
Views during voting: 280
Votes: 217
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0

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 05/15/2006 06:00:47 AM
Originally posted by timfythetoo:
Greetings from the Critique Club -

At first glance I had a hrad time figuring out what I was looking at. Upon realizing what it is I see that you have a cool angle on this stairwell. The rotation works really well to make me wonder.

Beyond that I think my biggest issue with this shot is the focus. This may be a result of the image not being the maximum size the site allows. A loss of 160 pixels can make a huge difference on the focus of the shot. THere is a tutorial somewhere on this site on how to Save for Web that would give you thebest bang per buck on pixels for challenge entries.

Your lines, lighting and shadows all work good on this shot. The geometric perspective is cool and fits the challenge. Either more crop on the right or less on theleft would have brought the shot more into balance. Abit too much dead space on the right compared to the left.

Hope these help. Congrats ona personal best and I hope you see many more.

Tim


thanks tim!
 05/14/2006 10:24:37 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club -

At first glance I had a hrad time figuring out what I was looking at. Upon realizing what it is I see that you have a cool angle on this stairwell. The rotation works really well to make me wonder.

Beyond that I think my biggest issue with this shot is the focus. This may be a result of the image not being the maximum size the site allows. A loss of 160 pixels can make a huge difference on the focus of the shot. THere is a tutorial somewhere on this site on how to Save for Web that would give you thebest bang per buck on pixels for challenge entries.

Your lines, lighting and shadows all work good on this shot. The geometric perspective is cool and fits the challenge. Either more crop on the right or less on theleft would have brought the shot more into balance. Abit too much dead space on the right compared to the left.

Hope these help. Congrats ona personal best and I hope you see many more.

Tim
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/06/2006 08:23:04 PM
Interesting geometry
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 05/06/2006 04:13:03 PM
Nice and simple. I like it.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/04/2006 06:27:18 AM
I really like the photo but its quite hard to give it a good score when its smaller than all the other photos
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/04/2006 01:00:34 AM
Nice light and exposure
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 05/03/2006 12:48:23 PM
Very abstract not sure what I am looking at perhaps to centered for me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/03/2006 05:56:02 AM
Very well done. Love the lighting and colour.
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 05/03/2006 03:56:53 AM
nice
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