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02/05/2006 04:28:45 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi
Kari from the Critique Club, the following is a critique of your pic.
First Impression - the most important one:
Lovely, and beatiful cityscape ... very peaceful picture.
Composition:
I feel this is a little centred, I also think that it needed to be. the reflections are truely lovely and the impression from just looking at them is just fantastic as well.
Subject:
Best of ... and you did well, not only on subject, but your overall second best scoring ... you are on the improve!
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
I love the out of the camera with just a little cropping shots. To me this is what a lot of photography is about ... being able to show the reality as beautifully as you can ...
To grow its vote?:
You did well ... I don't really know how to grow votes in the best of as it is such an open and personal thing to vote on. With many fantastic shots in it.
Summary:
The impression is lovely, your portfolio is growing, keep it up you are producing some wonderful pics.
If you have any comments of wish to further clarify the criqitue please feel free to PM me.
Cheers
Kari |
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01/30/2006 08:40:15 PM |
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01/29/2006 05:03:15 AM |
| A little less sky would have benefitted your composition. Lovely relfection. The border is a bit soft (I know you probably meant it that way), but it makes the image look too soft. |
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01/26/2006 02:49:36 PM |
| The title adds nothing to this shot, but the shot on second looks needs a higher score,. bumping up. |
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01/26/2006 07:21:59 AM |
| What a magical reflection, you have here in this lovely image..... |
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01/22/2006 11:18:47 AM |
| Beautiful, Love the reflection, great city/country combination. |
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01/21/2006 08:14:44 PM |
| Beautiful city scape. I really like the reflections. |
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01/19/2006 12:48:33 PM |
| Beautiful job! Love that reflection and the way this is composed. The exposure is very good as there are no blown out areas that I can see. |
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01/18/2006 10:20:58 PM |
| 10 from me....the clouds are great! |
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01/18/2006 06:22:37 PM |
| Nice reflections, pretty clouds. A very tidy composition - it does have that hopeful morning light. |
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01/17/2006 09:12:45 AM |
| Very nice reflections in the water. A great tranquill photo :) |
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01/17/2006 12:40:25 AM |
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01/16/2006 03:55:41 PM |
They decided to keep building on the delta, even though the rest of the city had sank...
Clean and crisp. Nice reflections. |
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01/16/2006 03:13:37 PM |
| I think a rule of thirds composition would have had this score higher from me. |
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