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12/29/2005 11:00:02 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club!
Cool pun idea and a good one to photograph. You did well with this and there are only a few things I might think about doing differently.
I think it might carry a bit more impact if it was cropped in closer so that there wasn't as much table showing...maybe having the apple moved a bit more onto the note.
The other thing I would do is have the note handwritten instead of typed...especially being from a woman. I think it would have added a bit more flare to the shot.
The only other thing might have been to have a "prettier" apple; one of those nice and photogenic shiny red ones :)
Lighting and focus both seem to be fine and colors are natural and very good. The idea is always the hardest part, and I think it's evident that some thought went into this one. Well done!
I hope this is helpful.
Judy |
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12/20/2005 04:52:02 AM |
| Great play on words again, with this dear Adam letter............................... |
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12/19/2005 01:39:53 PM |
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12/19/2005 01:28:59 PM |
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12/19/2005 12:19:18 PM |
| Haha, that's awesome. I'm sure you're scoring well with this one....nice job! |
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