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07/11/2003 11:21:16 AM |
Anna, thanks for the critique (my first in a while!). I did consider cropping out the upper left corner. I tried and tried - rotated, etc. but I was losing a lot of sharpness and detail that I didn't think I could compensate for in NeatImage. Here is one of my other attempts.
I think I'll give it another try during my next visit to the Zoo.
Thanks again for the helpful critique!
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07/09/2003 06:42:12 PM |
*Critique Club*
Wow this actually fits two very recent challenges both the B Challenge and the Speed Challenge.
It is such a cool photo it really does show so much it has a great deal of detail in it. Your focus is fabulous. Your bees moving around blurred and then the honeycomb being in such wonderful focus.
A very good finish my question is did you try cropping it differently so you would cut out the left top corner? Although I know it is bees moving it seems to distract from the rest of the photo.
Nicely done and congrats on the 3rd place
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07/08/2003 12:46:00 AM |
Thanks to all that took the time to comment on this submission. I can hardly believe that I have earned a second ribbon in as many weeks. It may be luck, but I'd like to think that it has to do with what I am learning from many of my fellow DPC addicts. Perhaps I will be lucky enough to complete the set and win a red ribbon one day! Thanks again!
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07/07/2003 12:42:51 PM |
| Congrats on the yellow ribbon! |
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07/07/2003 12:40:43 AM |
| Absolutely excellent. I didn't get a chance to comment while voting, I don't think, but this was one of my few 10's. Congrats on the ribbon! |
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07/07/2003 12:26:28 AM |
| You must have been busy as a bee to get this shot! Congrats on your ribbon! |
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07/07/2003 12:09:55 AM |
| congratulations, jerrft...great shot!! |
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07/07/2003 12:04:23 AM |
| Fabulous shot.. congrats on 3rd. |
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07/06/2003 08:17:48 PM |
| Wonderful colors. What really gets me though is the feeling of movement in the picture, on top of that one bee remains sharp - you really captured the essence of what it must feel like to bee in a hive :) One of my favorites this week -10 |
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07/06/2003 07:12:39 PM |
| I would never have gotten this close to the bees for this picture. You're a better man than I... :) |
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07/06/2003 05:42:48 PM |
| VERY busy bees! Super shot! Colors and tones are magnificent! 10 |
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07/06/2003 10:25:24 AM |
| Nice. I like the sense of activity - the way many of the beese are blurred with motion - but also the still focus on a couple near the center who are not moving at this moment. This is a very effective picture, and somewhat unnerving - I'm not sure I want to be as close to the bees as you've brought us. :) Good one! |
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07/06/2003 09:38:14 AM |
| This is a wonderful shot, the superb yellow lighting adds a lot of feeling to the scene. A winner in my book. 10 |
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07/06/2003 09:35:53 AM |
| Excellent focus, framing...one of my favorites! |
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07/06/2003 04:21:57 AM |
| Excellent shot but maybe a faster shutter speed would have sharpened up some of the bees. 8 |
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07/03/2003 11:12:08 PM |
| WHOA! This is an amazing shot! Good luck, hope you ribbon. 10 |
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07/03/2003 04:10:02 PM |
| Bees doing a dance? This is a great shot. Those honey makers may be out to get a hold of this shot! |
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07/03/2003 03:57:59 PM |
| You have captured the Bees well. I like the way they glisten, 8 |
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07/03/2003 10:58:27 AM |
| You're very brave to be getting that close. I'm getting the "creeps" just looking at this. |
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07/03/2003 01:38:26 AM |
| Just started voting but I think it is one of the top 10 |
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07/01/2003 07:38:57 PM |
| Don't think I would have wanted to be that close. |
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07/01/2003 11:46:51 AM |
| Best of the "Bee Shots" by far! 8 |
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07/01/2003 08:41:37 AM |
| Really like the way that all attention is focussed on the middle bee - and great result for capturing this challenge. Appears there's just a little blur from the middle bee's movement as it doesn't some quite as clear as the honeycomb, but its a great shot nonetheless |
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07/01/2003 06:25:00 AM |
| Top capture! The motion blur is very effective - 9. |
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07/01/2003 03:03:20 AM |
| Amazing, I can almost hear the buzzing |
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06/30/2003 08:09:19 PM |
| This is sooo cool! Great picture! good luck ;) perfect 10 if I could vote |
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06/30/2003 08:03:01 PM |
| hope you didnt get stung! Great image |
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06/30/2003 03:36:30 PM |
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06/30/2003 02:42:36 PM |
| Awesome shot. I like the motion implied by the "outside" bees and the sharp focus on the inside ones. |
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06/30/2003 12:59:34 PM |
| Focus is super, light is super, composition is spooky!!!!! lol Nice shot. |
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06/30/2003 10:47:16 AM |
| I love this, the one bee in the middle is in focus and the other bees look very busy. HOW did you manage to get so close???? |
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06/30/2003 04:03:40 AM |
| Nice shot. Shame you couldn't use a slightly faster shutter speed, or did you want to convey motion? |
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06/30/2003 03:47:17 AM |
| lose the border. great bee shot |
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06/30/2003 03:32:23 AM |
| Nice image - I think it would work well for the speed challenge too. |
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06/30/2003 01:14:33 AM |
| looks like speed and b challenges got combined a 5 |
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06/30/2003 01:06:39 AM |
| Great motion here. I particularly liked that you kept (or captured) one of the bees without too much motion. Excellent. |
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