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Challenge: Self-Portrait Revisited (Classic Editing)
Collection: Challenge Entries
Camera: HP PhotoSmart 315
Location: Bathroom
Date: Jun 16, 2003
Galleries: Portraiture, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Jun 16, 2003

Well folks, this is me. Heather Lancaster. I have horrible pale white skin color, so black and white it is. I'm almost transparent I'm so pale. lol
Took this in the bathroom cause it's the only place where i can get it dark.

Statistics
Place: 49 out of 222
Avg (all users): 5.8996
Avg (commenters): 7.2667
Avg (participants): 5.8029
Avg (non-participants): 5.9930
Views since voting: 3788
Votes: 279
Comments: 19
Favorites: 2 (view)


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02/14/2005 03:09:50 AM
This is a good shot heather, you know how to create a facial expression. This is a nice self portrait...Ruben88 is right , I always stood by my opinion of you !
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12/24/2003 09:38:39 PM
hehe, selling prints of a self-portrait? the idea seems strange to me.
08/06/2003 01:39:46 PM
Love it, great work, you are beautifull
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06/25/2003 08:53:40 AM
*Critique Corner*

Guess who got yours. What do I say about yours? The focus is good the lighting works well for this, leaving mild shadows where needed. That one strand of hair adds such a statement to the photo, but at the same time that is where your problem is. As I sit here I notice it looks slightly soft at the end and I can decide if it is fanning out slightly of if the focus is off on it. Whichever it is it does pull the eye to it.

Over all I thing this is a very beautiful self portrait and well done.

Anna
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/24/2003 03:02:01 PM
Nice expression, composition & contrast.
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06/23/2003 02:14:45 AM
Great expression, the wisp of hair works and adds visual interest.
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06/22/2003 08:31:42 PM
Well done. A nice portrait and a good example of the challenge. 8 Morgan
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06/21/2003 10:49:29 PM
Nice, simple, sweet. I like the space on the left side that keeps your face from being overpowering or overpowered - a nice balance there - and the strand of hair hanging down over your face makes the picture, in many ways. Beautiful.
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06/19/2003 09:09:22 PM
Beautiful! Just beautiful.
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06/19/2003 11:17:21 AM
Why so glum? You're gorgeous! And this photo works well, too. Nice tight composition and lighting is just wonderful! 9
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06/19/2003 05:05:56 AM
Nice pic, without the strand of hair it would be less (if that makes any sense?)
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06/19/2003 02:52:24 AM
Nice mysterious pose. Beautiful model. Like the b&w.
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06/19/2003 12:21:14 AM
cute, nice tones
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06/18/2003 02:33:04 PM
The bottom of the picture seems a bit strange to me cause it looks like your chin extends into your shoulder without much seperation.
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06/18/2003 11:05:38 AM
I think a portrait should reveal some character, or emotion of the model, by showing expression in eyes or other facial features. Did your picture accomplish that? Yes.

Lighting: good

Exposure:good

Creativity: not much

Composition: good

Background: good
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06/18/2003 10:49:18 AM
Great picture. well lit and wonderful expression. and you're adorable.
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06/18/2003 05:29:28 AM
Lovely expression. The strand of hair down your face does so much for this pic. The lighting is spot on and the B&W works.
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06/18/2003 05:13:38 AM
your face is very photogenic, I like this part of hair falling over your eye and face. nice composition and nice crop.
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06/18/2003 12:40:51 AM
nicely done....love the tone and the light...with a good pose.
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