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10/08/2005 12:49:54 AM |
| I am surprised you are not diabetic by now? LOL! |
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10/05/2005 06:37:22 PM |
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Initial Impression:
Very "realistic" card - looks like something you could buy!
Composition:
I like how you composed the shot. The sweep of the rose & the candy kisses cradles frame the rings & text nicely. I like how you have one of the kisses sideways - it gives a sense of spontaneity & enhances the romantic quality of the photo.
Color/Tone:
It's not bad, but I think I would prefer the background to be a true white. Perhaps you were going for a soft candlelight-type white balance, but I don't really get that feeling from it. Also, I don't care for the orange-ish color of the text - a deeper red to match the beautiful color of the rose would have been more pleasing, I think.
Focus/Exposure:
Very crisp focus! The highlights could be considered little too bright, but I think it works for the type of photo it is. Did you think of trying some gaussian blur to it?
Title:
Well, the challenge said to name it the type of card it is, and you did, so the title was very well done! I don't think the parenthesis around Golden are necessary, but oh well!
Meets the Challenge:
Yes - you've met the challenge extremely well.
Summary:
Very commercial looking - I can totally see this on a "real" card. You really have created a beautiful photo in honor of your wife - congratulations! |
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10/02/2005 10:36:07 PM |
| Great set-up, I hope your efforts are rewarded. |
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10/02/2005 08:04:10 PM |
| very nice picture and photo..I love it..!!! |
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10/01/2005 08:51:34 PM |
| this is really nice composition. |
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09/30/2005 06:46:09 PM |
| Really nice image...might have perferred the words to be more off center with the kisses more in the frame. |
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09/30/2005 11:43:38 AM |
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09/28/2005 10:49:25 PM |
| this is a really greetind card |
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09/27/2005 11:23:26 PM |
Fit Challenge Criteria: 2/2
Contrast/Color: 2/2
CompositioN: 2/2
Photo Quality: 2/2
My Subjective Affinity: 1/2 |
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09/27/2005 05:17:53 PM |
| This has nice focus and clarity. I like the kisses, but I can't decide if the little paper almond flags add humor, or distract me. |
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09/27/2005 10:54:44 AM |
| Classic but always works I think. A nice set-up. |
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09/27/2005 07:51:10 AM |
Nicely executed, but a little 'sickly' for my taste.
Some of the flowers could do with a clean up |
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09/26/2005 05:20:12 PM |
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09/26/2005 09:24:50 AM |
| OOpppppssss a beautiful card but adding the writting may not have been the right thing to avoid a DQ, fingers crossed and hope it makes it. |
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09/26/2005 03:24:33 AM |
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