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04/20/2003 11:34:13 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club,
Composition:
This is a wonderful composition. The leading lines formed by the compass work very effectively to pull the viewer's eye to the pi symbol on the slide rule. These leading lines seem even more powerful because they are so much different than the horizontal lines on the slide rule that run through the entire photograph. Black and white works very well here also.
Technical:
Excellent depth of field (DOF) -- the pi symbol is in sharp focus, with the numbers on the slide rule being less in focus as you look higher up on the slide rule. This effect places even more emphasis on the pi symbol.
Meet the Challenge Objective?
Yes, meets the challenge objective very very well. Excellent photograph and deserving of the high placement it received in this challenge. Great work kiwiness!
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04/15/2003 06:16:53 PM |
| Congratulations! Nicely done! |
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04/14/2003 06:36:39 PM |
| Congratulations! Nice crisp shot. |
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04/14/2003 04:22:27 PM |
| Well done, well deserved 2nd place. |
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04/14/2003 01:07:06 PM |
| Congrats on the fine finish! Excellent macro and a nice take on this challenge. |
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04/14/2003 11:40:54 AM |
| Your work is lovely. Congratulations. |
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04/14/2003 09:47:48 AM |
| I think that next week it's gona be a gold.. ;-) |
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04/14/2003 06:03:58 AM |
| Thanx for all your helpful comments! I was so surprised getting two ribbons in two weeks, amazing. Thanks heaps!!! |
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04/14/2003 04:48:18 AM |
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04/14/2003 01:22:40 AM |
| Congrats Kiwi! Last week third, this week second, you're on a roll! |
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04/14/2003 12:43:58 AM |
kiwi! congrats! great work! - a great welcome to the e-series group! :P
Message edited by author 2003-04-14 00:44:24. |
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04/14/2003 12:40:03 AM |
| This is a fantastic interpretation of Pi! I didnt vote on this challenge, but would have voted you high. Congrats and well done on 2nd! |
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04/14/2003 12:11:22 AM |
| woohoo!!!! you did it again!! you're gonna be unstoppable now!! congrats, kiwi...well done!! |
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04/14/2003 12:05:24 AM |
| Damn hot man - good shot. |
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04/14/2003 12:05:24 AM |
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04/14/2003 12:04:45 AM |
| Two ribbons in two weeks! Way to go man! |
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04/13/2003 10:32:57 PM |
| Good shot. It looks really good. I like how soft it is. I'm thinking John Setzler. |
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04/13/2003 01:23:54 PM |
| Simple, straightforward, and a good shot. I don't like the small white border on the inside because it blends in with the white on the bottom and right, but not top and left. |
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04/13/2003 11:46:41 AM |
| Great shot. Nice set up, well taken photo. Greyscale is the way to go with this one. |
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04/12/2003 08:10:58 PM |
| I could have taken a shot like this if I'd thought of it... |
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04/12/2003 01:02:55 PM |
| Nice black and white. The composition is a bit too formal for me... everything so well aligned. It suits the subject matter, but it's dull. |
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04/11/2003 01:22:08 PM |
| One of my favourites this week. Great in b&w, focus and cropping. I like the composition too. Very well done. Good luck! |
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04/11/2003 12:54:53 PM |
| I really like how clear and crisp the metal looks in this. I also like the choice of b/w. 9 |
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04/10/2003 05:19:50 AM |
| great photograph.... I think this is my favorite in this challenge. I love the sharp detail and the diagonal composition... great work :) = 10 - setzler |
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04/09/2003 12:07:51 AM |
| Nicely done photo. Like the tone and contrast. Good job! |
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04/08/2003 04:14:53 PM |
| Great photo. Reminds me of my old engineering days. Sharp and clean. |
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04/08/2003 02:53:33 PM |
| Excellent focus, detail, and DOF. Very clean shot. Love the black and white, brings out the metal appearance. Cleaning up those specks on the wheel, etc. later is going to make this awesome. |
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04/08/2003 02:08:00 PM |
| Technically very well done - composition, focus, exposure - I wouldn't change a thing! 10 |
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04/08/2003 02:04:48 AM |
| A perfect 10 ! The composition, detail and lighting are all right on the money ! |
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04/07/2003 08:10:03 PM |
| I really like this. The clarity, focus and DOF are excellent. |
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04/07/2003 08:05:51 PM |
| nice clean image, i like the compostion and lighting. |
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04/07/2003 07:31:41 PM |
| Another beautiful and outstanding black and white photograph. Excellent focus with such sharpness. Lighting is great. The visual impact of your photograph is exceptional. Your work shows great inspiration and creativeness. |
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04/07/2003 06:29:13 PM |
| Nice focus, tones, and light. Good composition. Nice nice work. |
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04/07/2003 03:21:11 PM |
| This photo, effective in B/W, really communicates the scientific "magicalness" of pi to me. Suberb composition, I'm glad I have to look, for just a moment, to find the pi symbol. |
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04/07/2003 02:22:42 PM |
| Beautifull instruments. Where, in this day and age, did you find a slide rule? Nice shot. |
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04/07/2003 01:22:09 PM |
| oooh...great shot! the detail is amazing and i love the DOF. nice job! |
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04/07/2003 11:45:17 AM |
| Nice and sharp. Good exposure. |
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04/07/2003 03:20:15 AM |
| Excellent use of black and white. The graphic quality to this is very interesting and eye catching. Tack sharp focus. It all just works! |
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04/07/2003 01:48:52 AM |
| Nice shot.. Love the black and white. One of the best so far. :) 8. |
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04/07/2003 12:20:35 AM |
| super sharp, nice exposure too |
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