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05/11/2005 09:50:18 AM |
I attempted to create a feeling of deep in the night. To those who asked what was the focus point, it is those two people you see in the oddly lit windows. Neither could sleep and both got back out of bed, perhaps got on the computer and who knows; may have contacted each other in a chatroom, not guessing they live across the empty, sleeping street from one another. A big city has a lot of stories.
Message edited by author 2005-05-15 10:32:50. |
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05/10/2005 08:46:07 PM |
| There is almost too much going on in this picture. Who is restless? Someone in one of the windows? The photographer? The city? Also, there is something that looks like a wood beam (left side - top to halfway down) that I can't identify. It's driving me nuts - thought it was a window frame at first - now I'm fixated on it. |
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05/06/2005 10:18:00 PM |
| ithis is fantastic after a pause .. nice 3 layered composition ... near windows, middle street, far greater city .. hope some others take time to appreciate and think .. this tells a humanistic story common to all .. one of the few 10's i've ever given |
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05/06/2005 06:03:23 PM |
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05/06/2005 12:31:27 PM |
| I like this. I like how the unidentified city lights in the background contrast with the identifiable bedroom window and street lights below. |
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05/06/2005 09:08:11 AM |
| this is busy. What is your focus point??? |
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05/05/2005 11:37:57 PM |
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05/05/2005 01:10:05 PM |
| wwashed out it looks. no good become. |
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05/05/2005 01:27:11 AM |
| This seems washed out, and could use a good contrast boost. Scene seems drab, though, with the exception of the colors at the lower right. |
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05/04/2005 08:05:23 PM |
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05/04/2005 05:19:22 PM |
| Of all the cityscapes in the challenge, this really stands out...it's not "pretty postcardy" but it says something, which in my book means so much more. As I look at the picture I start to wonder about the lighted windows, asking questions, wanting to know more...there is such a great atmosphere created within this picture...its makes us think, or it should anyway...very well done. |
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05/04/2005 04:24:00 PM |
| Would have worked well for "minimalism" too. Good story. Cropping out much of the bland left hand side would better focus attention on the story IMO. |
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05/04/2005 09:22:56 AM |
| Seems a little flat to me and no real subject. |
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05/04/2005 01:06:08 AM |
| Did you go to Sao Paulo for this? Tell Thiago I saidhi |
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