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05/12/2002 10:38:00 PM |
| For me, its ok to crop the milk as you did, but i would've liked to see the whole pot. Also wish the cocoa package was fully visible. |
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05/12/2002 09:00:00 PM |
| The image seems a little busy with everything goin on in it, but I suppose it shows the multiple uses. The subject def. stands out. |
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05/12/2002 03:21:00 PM |
| I think different lighting would've made this more inviting. Maybe a little darker, so it feels warmer? |
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05/12/2002 11:34:00 AM |
| I'm a Swiss Miss fan myself, but Hersheys is okay too. |
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05/10/2002 10:51:00 AM |
I like the layout to this shot. The shot itself is not very clean this could be due to the software.
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05/09/2002 05:24:00 PM |
| good idea for an ad, could be improved by simplifying the layout, try removing an element or two. actually, if you just composed a tight vertical of the hershy's can with the pan of cocoa in the foreground it would work better |
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05/09/2002 02:31:00 PM |
| This looks too tempting. It seems slightly out of focus but I think it gives it a more old fashioned feel. |
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05/09/2002 02:26:00 PM |
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05/09/2002 11:56:00 AM |
| picture seems grainy, arrangement of artifacts isn't very pleasing to the eye, I have that spoon |
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05/09/2002 10:53:00 AM |
| You should have used sharpen, because this isn't the clearest it could be. Otherwise a very nice setup, good job! |
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05/08/2002 09:50:00 PM |
| I really like this. spoon has a tad too much reflection |
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05/07/2002 10:34:00 PM |
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05/07/2002 09:07:00 PM |
| Nice composition. There appears to be quite a bit of noise in this shot along with a red colorcast. Good effort. |
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05/07/2002 04:31:00 AM |
| presumably you preferred the brand label on the shadow side. that's a nice deviation from the norm. however the shot seems to lack emphasis. the spoon is distractingly reflecting a lot of your side light, also. |
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05/07/2002 03:07:00 AM |
Mmmm... cocoa....
I think this image is a bit too busy to be an effective advertisement. I don't think it needed the milk bottle to be in the shot, and the stovetop is just a bit extraneous. I think just the cup with those little cakes and the cocoa tin could have been enough, maybe with some other table setting type things? Still, it made me go mmmmmmm :) |
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05/06/2002 11:03:00 PM |
| not a very clear photo. also, you cut off the milk bottle and pan on the stove. just doesnt look like a professional advertisement |
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05/06/2002 06:47:00 PM |
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05/06/2002 05:37:00 PM |
| Looks yummy, but a little out of focus. |
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05/06/2002 02:50:00 PM |
| Good job! Maybe taking a half step back to inclue everything into the photo? i dunno but it is makin me hungry! |
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05/06/2002 01:46:00 PM |
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05/06/2002 01:24:00 PM |
| Looks almost as though you took the picture direct from a TV.. sort of a still shot from video. Not the most exciting compo, but without a doubt, nearly perfect from a professional look point of view. |
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05/06/2002 12:36:00 PM |
| Good advert! (Warning: Cocoa can on burner!) I find nothing technically "wrong" with this photo advertisement. All 10s (Photo, Advert, Creativity) |
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05/06/2002 09:39:00 AM |
| Alll four are set up at equal distance. It's too symmetrical. This is a warm fuzzy on a cold winters day! Looks good. |
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05/06/2002 08:26:00 AM |
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05/06/2002 07:29:00 AM |
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05/06/2002 05:22:00 AM |
| I like this. I like the lighting. I like the natural at home feel to it. That goes well with the product ! This is well done:) |
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05/06/2002 02:09:00 AM |
| Composition and lighting. I think you may have to many items or too much space between them. Imo a close-up of Hershey produce and the mug setup would have made a stronger picture. Maybe the milk in the background? This photo reminds me of something from an old issue of a woman's magazine. I almost can imagine the hot cocoa recipe printed to the side. You may not have sold me any cocoa but you did a great joke on meeting the challenge. |
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