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Challenge: Poem II (Standard Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Olympus PEN E-P5
Date: Mar 18, 2018
Aperture: 8.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/400
Date Uploaded: Mar 24, 2018

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Statistics
Place: 25 out of 44
Avg (all users): 5.4444
Avg (commenters): 7.4000
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Views since voting: 389
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Votes: 36
Comments: 6
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AuthorThread
 04/06/2018 10:44:55 AM
Thanks to the poets of DPC.
Your facility with constructing/dissembling words is truly impressive.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/05/2018 10:26:05 PM
stilettos
slice across
the tarmac, the macadam
already squared and parcelled
but at 8 am
they pierce my pupils
and I want to die
of civilization,
of vivisection.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/05/2018 05:51:33 PM
shadows
shadow
shado
shad
sha
sh
s
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/03/2018 10:50:17 AM
morning
in suburbia
calm and wearisome
only shadows are traversing
routine
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 03/30/2018 05:23:47 PM
Angles and strong lines and textures and shadows,
Lessons in shapes taught in suburban meadows,
Quiet I feel at the end of the day,
Translated here in diverse shades of gray.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 03/30/2018 11:41:46 AM
shadows, a poem.

Suburbia awakes in a fury
Cock-eyed and head strong,
and smug in its superiority,
cleaner than it should be,
dirtier than it wants to be.

The lines intersect
unaware of mortgages
and divorces, and seedy trysts
in late model sedans and love
cleaner than it should be,
dirtier than it wants to be.

And all the while,
the day in and day out
the sturm und drang
plays it self out
cleaner than it should be,
dirtier than it wants to be,
in the shadows.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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