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11/21/2004 06:53:05 PM |
What! Just her head?
Way too much space above her, cropping the bottom half or so of the image would improve it a bit, but as it is, especially with her looking down away from the camera, she doesn't hold my attention. The umbrella is more of a focal point. |
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11/21/2004 04:22:06 PM |
| Way too much space on top for this otherwise well shot image. |
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11/20/2004 06:40:00 PM |
| this is a great shot but would have been more powerful if you had cropped out all the white space. |
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11/20/2004 06:05:32 PM |
| Nice portrait. Looks neatimaged though. |
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11/20/2004 12:02:06 PM |
| Like the composition, but lighting is too flat |
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11/19/2004 08:48:54 PM |
| You're going to get a few comments about the shadow on the wall ... oh, I guess this is one of them. I bet the umbrella was red ... they're always red, it seems. |
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11/18/2004 06:19:41 AM |
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11/17/2004 10:14:39 PM |
| I like this image, I wish the girl was looking at the camera so I could see her eyes. |
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11/17/2004 09:59:43 PM |
| Nice shot! might have cropped more of the white off the top. |
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11/17/2004 03:53:28 PM |
| The white at the top seems distracting to my eyes, drawing me away from the rest of the photo, perhaps crop tighter to make the umbrella lead the focus to her? |
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11/17/2004 02:11:16 PM |
| NIce idea and set up, but I feel the flash is too harsh. |
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11/17/2004 10:17:54 AM |
| Like the shot........but all the white at the top keeps drawing my eyes away from the subject. Maybe crop most of it out? Or a dark background would maybe make the subject stand out more? |
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11/17/2004 09:17:07 AM |
| I like this a lot. I'm not sure about the negative space on top, though. |
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11/17/2004 05:19:58 AM |
| The lighting is a bit harsh since her shadow is on the back of the umbrella and the composition could have been better, the negative space at the top doesn´t do anything for me. Anyway, not bad, as a matter of fact better than most shots in the challenge, keep it up. |
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11/17/2004 01:18:30 AM |
| Lovely portrait, the tones really work well... |
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