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02/12/2003 12:31:40 AM |
Critique Club:
Meets the Challenge: Perfectly!
Composition: I cannot find fault with the composition. Good cropping. Nice neutral colors in the background and the non-subject items help bring out the red in the apples.
Technical Quality: Very Good. Colors perfect, focus very good. I would also (like others below) liked to have seen the "meat" of the bitten apple with more light on it. Maybe a little fill flash with a make-shift bounce would have helped lighten it up or maybe could have been lightened up a little more in a levels adjustment. Focus very good, no post-processing issues noticed.
Creativity: Good, although not what I would consider extremely creative.
Overall Conclusion: Beautiful photograph, well shot and very appealing with lots of warmth expressed.
Hope this helps, if you have questions, feel free to email me.
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02/10/2003 12:52:37 AM |
| Alright, You did pretty good. Keep up the good work. |
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02/09/2003 02:04:23 PM |
Good lighting and exposure, very clean shot.
Nice healthy glare from the apples and great colors. Nice background. |
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02/08/2003 11:06:01 PM |
| Really big bite. Lighting is uneven. |
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02/08/2003 12:39:48 PM |
| A very rich photo, nicely lit and composed. It doesn't grab me, but I can appreciate its technical merit. I can't fault it in that respect. |
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02/08/2003 01:53:18 AM |
| you need to light from the front as well as the side... still life shouln't have shadows that are under or to the side IMHO... one easy thing would be to use the flash... |
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02/07/2003 08:23:17 PM |
| I like the country feel to this shot. The lighting is good and the framing is nice. You did a great job. Good luck. |
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02/06/2003 11:03:45 PM |
Very nice shot. I really like the lighting in this shot. Nice and bright in the areas that need highlighted but nice shadows where needed. I would have liked to have seen the white in the bite of the apple a little brighter but that doesn't detract from this photo.
Bill Miller (wackybill) |
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02/06/2003 12:35:14 PM |
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02/06/2003 10:55:20 AM |
| Great focus and nice warm colors. That's a big bite! lol I'm not sure I care for the composition...i may have left the basket out. Still a good score :) Lisa |
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02/05/2003 09:56:13 PM |
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02/04/2003 10:35:51 AM |
| Crisp clear, good composition, nice colours & well lit. Great shot! |
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02/03/2003 09:29:08 PM |
| Very nice still life. I didn't now an apple with a bite in it could look soo appealing. Good job. Jacko. |
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02/03/2003 12:22:12 PM |
| Nice composition, and the angle of the light works really well. JG |
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02/03/2003 09:11:00 AM |
| Love this composition. The only thing I'd prefer is for the apple bite ot be out of the shadow somewhat. But it sure is better than being over exposed. All in all a very nice image. |
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02/03/2003 12:25:21 AM |
| great shot! beautiful colors! |
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