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02/16/2003 10:51:19 AM |
...from Critique Club...
Bon Jour Nathalie ;)
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Great detail :)
COMPOSITION:
Perfect, IMO. You managed to balance the shot very nice, even though you used a similar subject as your background. I would simply add a couple more oranges to fill in the white gaps. :)
TECHNICAL:
Your lighting is very good on this shot. There aren't any harsh shadows, and the hot spots on the cut orange actually work nicely to create a sense of taste on the photo. I wish the leaf had been lit a bit more, as the color seems a bit dull. Focus is very good. :)
ARTISTIC:
Very creative on the setup of this shot. I think your cropping is what makes this shot attractive to look at. I love tight crops, so this really works nice for me. Great job :)
OVERALL:
A wonderfuly balanced shot, nicely executed, and deserving of its average vote...well done, congrats!
Cheers and good luck in the future challenges. |
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02/10/2003 02:20:59 PM |
Thanks to all for your comments. They really boost me up to pursue or improve my work! I'm really, really happy with my score!
Nathalie
Message edited by author 2003-02-11 22:09:29. |
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02/10/2003 08:42:09 AM |
| Very tasty picture. Well executed. One of my favourites. Keep up the good work. |
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02/09/2003 09:04:14 PM |
| beautiful photo. perfect lighting and focus. great colors and composition |
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02/09/2003 02:02:46 PM |
Great photo!
It makes me feel thirsty, it makes me wanting to make a fruit drink myself. :)
I like the composition, the colors are good, sharpness is ok. The green leaf makes it more interesting and complete. The glare from the fruit makes it look fresh and healthy.
The only thing it could do without is the reflection on the glass, haven't used my polarizer filter enough yet to know if that could take it away. This is my highest rated picture though. ;) |
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02/08/2003 12:23:43 PM |
| Luscious and tangy. I think this photo strikes the right balance. It's loaded with content and things to look at, but the composition ties it together, particularly with that bright pink circle of grapefruit flesh and green leaf. Nicely done. |
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02/07/2003 08:29:18 PM |
| really nice clear well lit, actually great lighting and focus. 10, Kevin |
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02/07/2003 10:26:40 AM |
| great composition. the addition of the green leaf breaks up the oranges and reds just enough. also adds to the fresh picked feeling. nice sharpness and clarity. A bit shiny with the lighting. maybe a diffuser? anyway.. that is only a nit pick. I like this alot. |
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02/06/2003 10:57:40 PM |
I love the color! Excellent focus and lighting. I'm glad you added the little bit of green into the shot. Thanks for sharing!
Bill Miller (wackybill) |
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02/06/2003 10:20:06 AM |
| Beautiful colors and composition. The glare on some of the fruit is a little strong (hard to control, i know) and that looks like some kind of ivy leaf :P (nit pick). Great job! 9 Lisa |
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02/04/2003 11:02:47 PM |
| This is so well done. the colors and lighting are great. The green leaf is a perfect addition to balance the shot. 10 |
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02/04/2003 09:39:52 PM |
| Good composition, excellent color and exposure. |
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02/04/2003 01:27:32 PM |
| nice concept but might have been better if you showed more of the jucie in the picture. |
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02/04/2003 10:52:55 AM |
| Great colours & composition. Excellent shot. |
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02/03/2003 08:57:19 PM |
| Nice set up. Looks real tasty. Goo interpretation of the theme. Jacko. |
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02/03/2003 01:18:15 PM |
| Pretty shot, good lighting and colors. |
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02/03/2003 01:00:40 AM |
| beautiful photo! love the colors! |
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02/03/2003 12:33:34 AM |
| Wonderful photo ! The color and light are perfect. GREAT unique idea ! 10 |
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