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Challenge: Supermarket Still Life (Minimal Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D800
Lens: Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-70mm f/2.8G ED
Location: Alberta, Canada
Date: Jan 31, 2017
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/80
Date Uploaded: Jan 31, 2017

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 02/08/2017 06:45:23 AM
Originally posted by booboo_goon:
I'm not sure what this tells me, random placement of subjects or there's a narrative?
Peanut is nuts for strawberry and jam?

Lacks narrative for me, doesn't particularly feel like any still life paintings I've seen?


Peanut Butter and Jelly. It's an American thing ;-)
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02/06/2017 07:00:43 AM
I'm not sure what this tells me, random placement of subjects or there's a narrative?
Peanut is nuts for strawberry and jam?

Lacks narrative for me, doesn't particularly feel like any still life paintings I've seen?
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 02/06/2017 04:55:46 AM
Nice and cute. Solid photography work, too. It looks a bit tilted to the right, but, on the other hand, the jam label looks perfectly straight. So, it could be me, not the image.
Personally, i would have swapped the two jars. Give the extremely shallow DoF, the PB is not recognizable in the back (unless you recognize the brand, which i don't). I looks that, if swapped, the strawberries on the jam label would be recognizable enough.
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 02/01/2017 10:30:19 AM
Great idea. I might suggest that you turn the jars so we cannot see the labels. All that text distracts, even when out of focus.
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