Greetings from the Critique Club!
So we meet again, Jonny...hehehehe....:-)
I like the bright poppiness of the colours here, and your choice of a natural setting. I also appreciate that you chose to stay away from the pills/tablets that dominated the entries in this challenge. And it was encouraging to see a more homeopathic entry took 2nd place. I like shots taken in situ, but there still needs to be a sense of context. I knew I was looking at a passionfruit, but the presentation is just a bit on the messy side.
A neatly sliced wedge of fruit, with more of the intact fruit visible in the background, would have helped drive the message home. Also, beware of portrait orientation - many voters dislike it as it means they have to scroll up and down in order to see the whole image.
As it stands, though, personally I would have used less ISO and more dof or some adjustments to take down the glariness of the pith (the thick white rind surrounding the fruit). If there had been a way to position the fruit without using the hand, so much the better.
Hope this helps!
Susan |
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