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09/13/2006 12:29:58 PM |
| lovely well composed image |
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02/04/2003 04:37:50 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Myqyl...
This is an interesting study on perspective and shapes, and congrats on second place :) I like this angle, but I also think this particular subject is begging to be skewed! Taking the skylight more radically off-center would create some more impact and allow the leading lines to play a larger role here. I probably would have underexposed this a few stops also to create some more contrast to keep the color from being flat. This image has great potential as a black and white as well... I think that one quick pass with the sharpen filter would also help out quite a bit in this image. It seems a tiny bit soft to me...
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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02/03/2003 09:46:40 AM |
| Congratulations on your third place. Though your picture didn't fire my rockets, it shows a different perspective and use of geometric shapes. Good job. |
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02/03/2003 08:30:23 AM |
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02/03/2003 12:26:09 AM |
A ribbon? Yikes! I didn't even prepare a speech :)
I'd like to thank my producer, the kind folks at Sony and my wife for putting up with all this :)
Oh, and the voters :)
But that's just me... |
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02/03/2003 12:10:32 AM |
Way to go Myqyl... Nice shot ... We need moreF717 ribbons !!!! Congrats ...
Bob
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02/03/2003 12:05:49 AM |
| Wonderful photo !!!!! I just love it ! |
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02/02/2003 04:42:12 PM |
| Great shot. I like it. Good luck. |
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02/02/2003 08:31:08 AM |
| Wow, I really like the angles, but I don't like the fact that i's pretty much the same the submission as the one in the Windows and doors challenge. |
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02/02/2003 02:31:24 AM |
| Great shot! IMO like to see more contrast on this |
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02/02/2003 01:56:48 AM |
| Hmmmm - very nice capture, but I think I would like it better if the window at the top was not so very bright. Nice capture of detail all around. Nicely done. |
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02/01/2003 03:09:14 PM |
| Great depth to this. Looks like a tunnel. Way to go. Nice clean focus. Cropped perfectly. Nice one. It's up there. |
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02/01/2003 06:03:33 AM |
Composition: Great. Can't help but wonder what an off-centre crop would look like..
Technical: Excellent focus, contrast and lighting (didn't see Windows & Doors submission)
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: One of those pics you just keep looking at. 8 |
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01/31/2003 01:53:57 PM |
| Interesting subject, i like the creativity.What is it and what angle are you shooting from. |
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01/31/2003 08:57:15 AM |
| my fav this week. very beautiful and geometric |
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01/30/2003 11:39:29 AM |
| I really like the way I am drawn into the skylite. I don't find the bright light disturbing and the radiating squares make this a "wow" for me. |
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01/29/2003 10:37:18 AM |
| this photo is very nice i really like the veiw |
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01/29/2003 08:40:19 AM |
| The skylight seems a bit overexposed to me. jgillard6 |
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01/29/2003 04:02:53 AM |
| A very good depiction of the subject |
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01/27/2003 11:55:01 PM |
| This is a great image. Very well done. It would drive me crazy lining this one up. I really like how the exposure is just hot enough so the crossbars are just starting to blow out. Nice work. |
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01/27/2003 11:39:00 PM |
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01/27/2003 10:59:49 PM |
| Maybe at another time of day, when the interior/exterior exposure could be better balanced? It's a shame to have all those lines leading to almost nothing. The walls do give a great dimensionality to the image, and I love the light on them. |
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01/27/2003 10:16:14 PM |
| ummmm... this was in the members challenge also..... |
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01/27/2003 09:00:36 PM |
| Very trippy image, a perfect 10. |
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01/27/2003 08:58:28 PM |
| Wonderful abstract...well done! |
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01/27/2003 06:05:35 PM |
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01/27/2003 01:24:49 PM |
| Very cool. The squares at the bottom look a little wider then the ones up top, were you exactly centered underneath? I think it would be a little stronger if it were totally symetrical, but still a strong shot. |
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01/27/2003 12:20:39 PM |
Red leader, this is Voodoo 1, we're not gonna make it... ***static***...we need some back up Luke....
Great Picture! 9 |
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01/27/2003 12:08:21 PM |
This is one of my favorites for this week. There are some blown out spots in the center of the picture but I am sure these are intentional, and they work very well in this case. I like the way the light is radiating in and the intensity drops off as you get closer to the edges. The lines are very strong and almost give me a sense of motion towards the light. I wouldn’t change anything about this shot. You have made an uninteresting (to me at least) topic interesting.
Greg
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01/27/2003 11:01:54 AM |
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01/27/2003 09:44:23 AM |
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01/27/2003 07:54:00 AM |
| Excelent looks almost SiFi |
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01/27/2003 03:16:09 AM |
| wow. bright. nice. illusional. |
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01/27/2003 02:56:58 AM |
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01/27/2003 02:15:18 AM |
| Nice effect even though a mundane subject |
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01/27/2003 12:19:11 AM |
| Simply love the way it pulls you into the photo. |
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