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02/09/2003 10:55:58 PM |
Critique Club Review
Great Colors! The angle of the window against the lines of the blocks surrounding it, seems a bit off to me. Perhaps cropping closer to the window itself, or a more "head on" angle would help. About the only other thing I notice is that the focus on the window seems softer than the scene within.
It is hard to recommend much here, as this is already a very good photo. |
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02/09/2003 05:19:47 AM |
I would like to thank everyone for their comments. The way I made the above picture was; I took a new picture of my brothers bedroom window from outside. I then cut out the glass parts, and added the sunset photo (that I took a few months ago) as the layer under that. I then blurred the edges of the window panes to blend them with the sunset, so it didn't look as edited. I then darkened the bottom two panes in another layer to look like the screen, and added the fogging in yet another layer. I think the over all look is pleasing and what I wanted, but I wish I would have rotated the sunset slightly to align it better.
Thank you again for your helpful comments, I hope to learn from them and do better the next time. Cheers!
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02/02/2003 09:46:15 PM |
| lovely sunset...great colors. i notice a dark like on the right side of each of the bottom panes...a bit distracting to me. otherwise, a beautiful photo. |
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01/30/2003 05:35:06 AM |
| You have captured this beautifully. It certainly meets the challenge. What I like about your image is the vibrant colours within the window frame. The title is excellent also. Great job and GL. |
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01/29/2003 10:53:36 PM |
| This is a great reflection. Nice shot. |
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01/29/2003 09:53:27 AM |
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01/29/2003 05:14:02 AM |
| I can't put my finger on it, but there is something "odd" about this photo that just throws me off. I like the "scene" outside the window though. |
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01/29/2003 04:52:44 AM |
| Excellent. Great colors, nice concept and well shot. The one thing I don't like is the difference in colors on the top 2 panes on the bottom outside corners. I think this one should be up there in the rankings though. Nice shot. - Inspzil |
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01/28/2003 10:34:00 PM |
| whether real or faux, thats a nice reflection in the window... although it does draw attention away from the window itself |
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01/28/2003 10:23:46 PM |
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01/28/2003 12:00:53 PM |
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01/27/2003 11:42:24 PM |
| The only thing that bothers me about this is the angle, other than that, this is brilliant, love colors, and idea. |
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01/27/2003 07:41:00 PM |
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01/27/2003 02:44:12 AM |
| nice image to see before going to bed |
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01/27/2003 12:56:04 AM |
| This is a great shot. I think that playing with perspective adjustments to square up the window in the frame would make it even better, for me. 8 Jak |
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