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09/06/2014 09:03:20 PM |
Critique Club Comment
Hi Gaylord,
There's some nice technical work here. The image is sharp with strong color, and lovely motion blur in the water. The tonal range is good with a full range of shadow to highlight.
What isn't working so well for me is the composition. The image is very busy compositionally. I find my attention jumping from the lovely curving lines of the tree on the right, to the the bright green foliage in the center, to the soft flowing water on the left. Each part works well independently, but not so well together as one cohesive scene. In summary, I find this to be a technically excellent image that would be improved with a more isolated single point of attention. |
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09/02/2014 11:19:37 AM |
| Pretty shot. I think I'd have liked to have had one of the subjects featured more strongly such as either the water or the tree. |
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08/29/2014 10:30:26 PM |
This is so relaxing....
already voted. |
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