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Challenge: Communication (Basic Editing I)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon PowerShot S1 IS
Location: Concord, California, USA
Date: Oct 11, 2004
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: auto
Shutter: 1/320
Date Uploaded: Oct 12, 2004

 One of the oldest methods of "long-range" communication. Isaac chose to form the letter "L" and I chose to use a shot with his back to me, both to hide his identity, and to help concentrate on the shapes and not the person. They should be square flags, but these were all I had.

Shot at the park next to Isaac's school; I got low to give as much feeling of "hilltop" as possible. I darkened it quite a bit, again to emphasize the shape, and because I like the way the little spot of sunlight catches his shirt and arms, almost making it look like he was in a spotlight or had someone holding a flashlight on him so he could be seen.

I thought about cropping a bit from the bottom, but decided I like the way the grass crops the bottom to leave an almost perfect square of sky, with Isaac's arms pointing to the corners.

Cropped a bit on the sides to 3:2 ratio. Tone curve. One application of USM at 66%/0.6 dia/TH=5. JPEG=8/10.

Statistics
Place: 35 out of 262
Avg (all users): 5.6580
Avg (commenters): 6.8333
Avg (participants): 5.6321
Avg (non-participants): 5.6748
Views since voting: 1184
Views during voting: 357
Votes: 269
Comments: 14
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 06/19/2011 12:02:14 PM
DPC has changed a lot since this challenge, as have the software and hardware/cameras. By today's tech standards, not the most "whiz bang" of images, but for you, I'm sure that it's a nice little "remember this day" sort of photo, and that's what snapshots are all about.
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 10/23/2004 01:28:21 PM
Thanks for the great comments, especially the ones about the sunlight on the shirt -- I really liked the way that came out. I would have cloned out the little spot (a crow, I think) but this was a Basic rules challenge.

I also left a lot of foreground grass to try and give the impression of a high hill, even though it's just about a 10-foot rise. For comparison, here's a square crop of the same photo.

 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/19/2004 11:02:42 PM
Great idea.. the black spot over the head is a bit distracting, but still a well shot photograph.. bumping to 9.. hope it places in the top 10.
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 10/19/2004 08:23:38 PM
this was reallygreat , bumping up to 9
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 10/16/2004 10:29:47 AM
square croped on the small dimension would resulted better.
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 10/14/2004 06:46:13 PM
maybe a little to dark...
cool idea :)
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 10/14/2004 03:16:37 PM
Orignal idea and you have caputred it well. I particulary like the light. good luck
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 10/14/2004 11:48:18 AM
Very nice image. Just too much grass - makes it heavy and drives attention from the boy. 6.
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 10/14/2004 07:54:32 AM
Ah, I wondered if anyone would put semaphore in. Good photo.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/14/2004 07:42:38 AM
Not bad, maybe cropping out some of the ground would frame the subject a little better.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/14/2004 12:22:48 AM
Nicely done. I love the colors of the sky and the sun on the shirt.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/13/2004 06:39:10 PM
cool idea and nice placement of arms make a strong image
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 10/13/2004 08:30:50 AM
Wonderful shot. I think I might have cropped a little tighter and lost some of the grass. Otherwise nicely done!
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 10/13/2004 07:45:17 AM
I would have preferred more sky and less grass personally, for a feeling of openness and space, but still very good. 7.
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