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Challenge: Red IV (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Pentax K-01
Date: Jul 21, 2013
Aperture: 4.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/125
Date Uploaded: Jul 23, 2013

ooh, back in the gallery!

what super comments; I had begun to despair.

white chickens at a premium hereabouts.

Statistics
Place: 88 out of 89
Avg (all users): 4.2330
Avg (commenters): 7.1250
Avg (participants): 4.4091
Avg (non-participants): 4.1017
Views since voting: 340
Views during voting: 181
Votes: 103
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/30/2013 10:33:29 PM
A lot going on here, but I like it; everyday life.
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07/30/2013 10:24:05 PM
needs more white chickens

dreamy shot.

I'm hanging this in my fantasy art gallery.

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07/30/2013 09:11:21 PM
love all these details.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/30/2013 09:08:54 PM
beautiful
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/30/2013 08:42:56 PM
Yes, the red is there as a focal point, and this tells a poignant story.
(Love the dog)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/30/2013 08:24:44 AM
Voted earlier coming back to comment.

upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens.

What a great find! Now it is not beside white chickens, but it is near a white laundry basket and some hanging laundry that is white or near white. The faded saturation of the final composition gives this a sense of age; an old photograph where the rich colors have faded with time. In my opinion, this has such great potential (7 and above) if only the main elements were better composed. I get the sense that this was not your property so that you could not go and rearrange the main subjects. However, what could have been done is to move off to the right to take it at an angle where that small tree trunk doesn't cut across the wheelbarrow. Or, if possible, step up to where the small tree is and take the shot from there so it doesn't interrupt the view of the red wheelbarrow. Also a closer zoom could have the red wheelbarrow fill the bottom right corner of the frame while the laundry would stretch across the frame from left to right.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/29/2013 12:56:08 PM
it does... and if you decide to move it, you've always the wheelbarrow.
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07/27/2013 08:41:06 PM
Great find but to me it is way to busy and cluttered looking, I think I would have loved to see this image if shot from a little closer and an angle that just included the wheel barrow and the laundry.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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