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03/15/2013 06:23:18 AM |
critique club
i don't like this image. the tungsten color cast isn't pleasing, the shadow on the right is attempting to capture my attention.
i admire the attempt at simplicity, it needs better lighting, too many competing elements take away from the what you are attempting to show based on your description.
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03/12/2013 01:39:08 AM |
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03/10/2013 08:33:23 PM |
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03/10/2013 05:46:23 PM |
This looks yellow to me not white! I do like the simplicity of your photo. |
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03/07/2013 01:06:12 PM |
Try overexposing by one stop to get the background lighter |
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03/06/2013 06:02:58 PM |
Has a vintage feel to it! Wish the rose was formed a little better..since my initial impression was a crumpled piece of paper :) |
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03/04/2013 09:58:55 PM |
I suspect the brownish color will decrease the scores. I'll be interested in any description of how this was made. |
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03/04/2013 03:07:05 PM |
well. your white balance was seriously off, and the exposure isn't as good as could be hoped, along with the fact that your subject is brighter than the background. Sorry, I really feel bad giving you a 3, but this is just miles away from excellence. |
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