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Challenge: In The Style Of: jagar (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D200
Lens: Nikon MF 28mm f/2.0 AIS
Date: Feb 10, 2013
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 320
Shutter: 1/2500
Date Uploaded: Feb 11, 2013

 I think this might be a little too reportage for John's style. jagar has a way of keeping that frame nice and clean but at the same time giving you that slice of humanity that only he can seem to capture. I'm not thinking this will do well; it's way too messy, but street photography is out of my comfort zone so it was fun to at least attempt to mimic his wondrous eye.

Here is one outtake:


[Feb. 19th, 2013 11:26:44 PM]

Here is the original.



The girl on the left was an accident. The one on the right I knew I wanted in the shot, unfortunately I was not in a position to compose correctly (as far as the top of the frame) in short instance. Oh well.

This is an 8x10 crop, pretty severe (not usually my style). Jagar tends use the whole 4x6 frame effectively, so I also failed there.

This is one of the few challenges where I felt I went out there and gave it a good shot. While I am not a street shooter, I spent 3 hours of shooting time. It felt good to actually spend some time with the camera again (very difficult to do these days). I think having jagar on my team really motivated me, so a big thanks for that.

Doubt it will break 6, but I am happy with the outcome.
Lots of good work in this challenge. Cheers all.

[Feb. 19th, 2013 11:49:32 PM]

Oh, and I forgot to mention. I think my 28mm is officially broken. :(

Statistics
Place: 37 out of 105
Avg (all users): 5.9220
Avg (commenters): 8.0000
Avg (participants): 5.9672
Avg (non-participants): 5.8875
Views since voting: 414
Views during voting: 306
Votes: 141
Comments: 18
Favorites: 1 (view)

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 02/20/2013 05:53:13 PM
This should have done much better. I have a feeling some voters didn't take the time to fully take in the picture and see everything. I think the focus on the two in the window combined with the textures and the lack of focus on the pronounced foreground is great. Didn't vote in this challenge but would have got an 8 from me.

Message edited by author 2013-02-20 17:54:45.
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 02/20/2013 08:00:00 AM
One of my top picks. Nice collection of comments and a Posthumous but your score should have been higher.
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 02/20/2013 03:28:03 AM
I think this is excellent and I'm glad you are on my team, well done.
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 02/20/2013 12:48:07 AM
Oh my... I love this.. 8 from me. A tiny violin... be proud and keep singing.
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 02/20/2013 12:07:19 AM
I gave this a 7 for the magic in the window. Really great capture!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/19/2013 10:22:17 PM
Excellent street capture. Well done for the challenge.
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 02/19/2013 08:23:31 PM
if someone told me that one of the photos in this challenge is a ringer, I'd pick this one.

I'm hanging this in my fantasy art gallery
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 02/19/2013 05:04:15 PM
Decisive moment reminiscent of Cartier-Bresson... or Jagar. Great pov, comp and tones.
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 02/18/2013 12:36:00 PM
This is a great "bvy meets jagar" image. Very well seen!
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 02/17/2013 05:49:42 PM
really like this, the story going on in my mind about this shot is endless!
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 02/15/2013 10:55:02 AM
Very interesting perspective.
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 02/14/2013 09:30:00 AM
superb!
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 02/13/2013 11:28:19 PM
Top 3
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 02/13/2013 07:07:03 PM
Great find, I went looking for something like this out of quaint windows, but no one on that day would look out of their windows, lol! 7
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 02/13/2013 02:35:21 PM
Most excellent use of focus to draw the eye. Nicely seen
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 02/13/2013 09:03:42 AM
Beautifully done!
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 02/13/2013 03:48:05 AM
I just love this, really great capture.
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 02/13/2013 12:48:08 AM
Took me a moment to figure out what was going on in this scene.
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