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07/28/2006 11:17:50 AM · #1 |
Hello All:
I am still learning but here are some photos that I took this morning.
Would love any feedback and suggestions.
//picprizes.com/index.php?page=album&memberid=799402759
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07/28/2006 11:28:30 AM · #2 |
The colours are quite beautiful, and you have most everything nice and sharp. I am thinking that maybe the backgrounds are too busy, and maybe it would be better not to cut off part of the big front petal of the yellow lily. It also usually is better to not center everything but place the area of most interest a bit to one side and towards the top or bottom (rule of thirds). Another thing you could try is to get rid of dry leaves or petal (like the big spent petal to the left of the yellow lily). And (since I'm at it - and this is just my opinion), if you're going to include a bug, it has to be prominent, not just a bug that happened to be on the flower.
I hope this helps :)
BTW, welcome to DPChallenge, I hope you enjoy it here.
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07/28/2006 11:30:55 AM · #3 |
| Listen to Ursala. She just kicked booty in the last Flower challenge! |
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07/28/2006 01:43:37 PM · #4 |
to add to what ursula suggested, i'd also increase the contrast on these a bit...
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