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 session416
Nikon D90 |
11/01/2009 03:59:34 PM |
i've been trying to work on my composition lately, rather then just showing the action.
i tried to include the riders watching on the side (on the thirds line) and then put the main subject on the intersecting thrids line.
bum shots are usually not a good thing for sports photos but i think it works here.
tell me what you think!
Message edited by author 2009-11-01 15:59:49. |
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Bear_Music
Canon EOS-5D |
11/01/2009 04:06:38 PM |
I don't think anything about it works, sorry. Including the bum, LOL. In your search for "composition" you've lost any sense of a focal point for the action and the image. If we could see his face, that might become a focal point, but...
R. |
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 thelobster
Canon EOS-30D |
11/01/2009 04:13:50 PM |
| Must admit i think it works as a collection of shapes, but you only have to look at my sciores and favourites to know that me liking it is the kiss of death. |
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session416
Nikon D90 |
11/01/2009 07:36:01 PM |
Originally posted by Bear_Music:
I don't think anything about it works, sorry. Including the bum, LOL. In your search for "composition" you've lost any sense of a focal point for the action and the image. If we could see his face, that might become a focal point, but...
R. |
noted, thanks! |
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