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05/28/2008 12:00:56 AM · #1 |
Post your outtakes from the Dappled Light challenge here. |
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05/28/2008 12:39:34 AM · #2 |
Entered: 9th place, thank you!
Outtakes: |
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05/28/2008 12:54:11 AM · #3 |
entered - and came 28th
But I didn't like the rough edit, the color was all wrong
a better version is on my flickr page
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05/28/2008 01:02:13 AM · #4 |
Say, I'm pretty happy with a top-40 finish, including several positive comments about the grayscale treatment, but at least one person thought it would look better in color ...
Entry: Natural color version:
I was also pretty torn about maybe entering this one ... but I just decided to go with the composed image rather than the found shot this time: |
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05/28/2008 05:03:35 PM · #5 |
Okay voters, here's my entry:
And here's my outtake:
I think I should have entered the outtake. Comments? |
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05/28/2008 06:12:51 PM · #6 |
I can't say I was very surprised at where I ended up, but I was surprised people couldn't seem to figure out what it was. So here's a different view....
entry (top 51%!!!)
outtake |
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05/28/2008 06:21:22 PM · #7 |
Originally posted by bvy: I think I should have entered the outtake. Comments? |
I think you entered the correct one. I think the trees in the longer view are a distraction, while your entry is more compositionally focused, and the "highlighting" of the single name in the foreground (a technique I tried to use in my entry as well!) helps make the photo more of a "story," rather than just a "scene." |
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05/29/2008 05:54:16 PM · #8 |
this was before I cropped it...and I really wavered between the two a -lot- and finally stuck to the cropped... 27 scores below a 5 so I wonder if the outtake would have done better? hrm...
Message edited by author 2008-05-29 17:56:54. |
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