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03/12/2006 09:49:59 AM · #1 |
Honest critique is requested.
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03/12/2006 09:55:24 AM · #2 |
Very good work, I like the texture. The bright white spots are not so good though. In the thumbnail you can't see them, having the same in the original would improve the image.
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03/12/2006 10:06:50 AM · #3 |
Originally posted by gloda:
Very good work, I like the texture. The bright white spots are not so good though. In the thumbnail you can't see them, having the same in the original would improve the image. |
Hmmm.....white spots are an effort to give the impression of snow fall.
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03/14/2006 11:16:46 AM · #4 |
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03/14/2006 11:36:03 AM · #5 |
I like it a lot - it's abstract and took me a second to realize what I was looking at.
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03/14/2006 11:52:50 AM · #6 |
| Since you want a snowfall effect, I would like the figures to be softer. |
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03/14/2006 12:31:54 PM · #7 |
If you want snowfall, I'd say use less dots and make them larger and softer.
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03/14/2006 02:05:33 PM · #8 |
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03/14/2006 02:15:07 PM · #9 |
| If you are going for snow, maybe find a way to "frost" the window. The condensation on the window looks more like rain. Not often you find a wet window during snowfall, mostly they are just frosted over. |
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