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06/30/2003 10:26:39 AM · #1
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This is the first portfolio I shot commercially. I would love to know what everybody thinks and what all I can try in the next shoots...
07/01/2003 10:40:18 AM · #2
no comments...no problems!!
I guess a lot else is going on at present!
07/01/2003 10:58:03 AM · #3
Excellent work, clear and crisp,great composition and you obviously got what was necessary from the model.

Did you do much post processing,what were the technicalities of the shoot etc.
07/01/2003 11:22:37 AM · #4
Those are excellent shots!!! There is one thing....I don't care for his month being open. Looks odd...but that could be just me.

You did good!!!!
07/01/2003 01:04:46 PM · #5
They look very good.

Agree I don't like his mouth open - works well for some models but his expression doesn't look natural to me like that.

I like the pose of the green tinged one best.

To a small extent, for my tastes, I find the lighting a little harsh where it causes completely white areas on his skin - blowouts - for example in the last one from his back down along his upper arm - personally I'd rather the highlight there was less severe but that's probably a matter of taste.


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