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| 11/26/2008 02:18:12 PM |
Dance of the veilby IreneMComment: This is obviously an accomplished shot but this kind of thing needs to be hangable to make it art, and currently the colour in this feels a bit drab and the viewpoint too high, so that the process looks too understandable (if that makes sense). A 90 degree plane with the water surface may yield more intrigue.
Just a couple of additional points: 1. it's over-sharpened, so I'd hold back a bit as it can spoil the subtleties, and it seems you've sharpened after adding a border. I'd do that last so you get a clean edge. 2. composition is a little awkward as it's neither centred or thirds, etc..
Cheers
Jon |
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| 10/19/2008 07:32:47 PM |
Doin' Yardworkby klkitchensComment: Great viewpoint - strong composition with the interest increased by the absence of a face. Just a cool shot really. |
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| 10/19/2008 07:31:09 PM |
Carbon Copiesby jegerComment: Very intriguing - as it looks like a street covered in lawn! Very surreal and what a weirdly fun looking place to kick a football. I bet this is a fantastic place for kids to play with each other. It doesn't get safer than this. Great, social BBQs too.
Your shot is well chosen and shot. The con trail somehow helps too. Good luck.
My favourite in the challenge I think, and it will tick many voters' boxes too. |
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| 10/13/2008 08:34:00 AM |
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| 08/10/2008 11:51:23 AM |
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| 08/10/2008 11:38:18 AM |
IMG_6341.JPGby MikeOComment: Nice candid this - very French-film like. Well observed mate. |
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| 08/08/2008 08:20:57 AM |
Duneby FalcComment: I can't believe you drove away from Yosemite!! I travelled thousands of miles to go there! Was the landscape not dramatic enough for you???
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| 08/07/2008 08:04:44 PM |
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| 08/07/2008 08:03:59 PM |
Catscapeby pointandshootComment: What a weirdly intriguing shot. I love it apart from a couple of loose ends around your masking of puss's outline. Nice polarised clouds. |
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| 08/07/2008 08:02:42 PM |
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