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by AnnaXT

Comment by wishiwaslikeyou:
I don't know if this is just me, but the photo seems a bit flat. A little bit of brightness and possibly contrast would help. I like the idea! :).

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Comment by kaiser_chief:
Yes, the item looks immovable, but the description for the chaallenge did say someone trying to move something immovable. It would have been great if the challenge was left further open (ie just Immovable) as this them would have scored better. Even a person sitting in the drivers seat, or leaning out the window would then have meant it met the challange completely.
Some light on the bus would have been better, as I find it too dull. The use of flash or lighting in some way to highlight the bus slightly would have added to this shot.
I am not sure about the crop. You have cut off the front and rear door slightly. Some more space both left and right would have added to the balance of the shot and even a little more foreground(with weeds included) could have helped, especially with the extra light.

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Comment by jomari:
Yep. That looks pretty immoveable.Maybe the contrast needs a little boost.

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Comment by ambaker:
Lighting is a little flat. Would like the bus brighter. But sure does look immovable.

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Comment by Love6:
this is a great idea (great spot too) I think this would have been helped greatly with level adjustment (is there a person inside? if so it looks like the back of the seat?) perhaps some bright colors to pull them out of all that darkness inside and or a hook/chain of someone trying to pull it just showing the front end would have been better?) just some thoughts! :-) darn I wish I had something like this local to me I would have been all over it with outtakes! :-D :-)

-back for another look :-) I hope you post where this is in your details! :-) this bus has some real cool aspects about it that would photograph fun in future challenges I bet! :-) (ie Closeup someone with their face near the hole in the glass looking thru.... etc...) ;-) what a great location!

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Comment by gideonp:
Bright sky bit distracting for me. Interesting balance and composition.

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Comment by Purple_Girl:
The light is a wee bit dark, looks like early morning or late evening. Good idea though, it's cool you had this resource nearby.

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Comment by CJinCA:
That bus doesn't look like its going anywhere! I wish it were a bit brighter though.
CJ

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by AnnaXT

Comment by jasonlprice:
Death to the sacred? Kinda harsh perhaps, but let me talk about the technicals....On my monitor the front of the skull looks OOF, the middle looks fine. The grass looks OK, so it is probably just my eyes! The lighting is pretty harsh and has killed (parden the pun) any texture that was in the skull. I think some soft light would have been more pleasing for this composition. It seems like a skull would have more interest for me, but for some reasonI just don't find it that interesting. Maybe it needed a better angle or cropped closer.

Just my opinion and random thoughts.....

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by AnnaXT

Comment by Tammer:
Interesting image. With a bit more contrast I would have scored it higher.