Andi5.jpg
by Blind_squirrel

Comment:
I love this one. Everything here is perfect, pose, expression, catchlights. good work.

Andi4.jpg
by Blind_squirrel

Comment:
her face is a bit too far turned. rather see her shoulders turned and her face squared, than face turned and shoulder squared.

use her hands/arms to create leading lines in posing, and get her to sit up straight, shoulders back. if your modeling, you need to show off your parts, not try to hide them.

again, lighting is good in all of these.

Andi3.jpg
by Blind_squirrel

Comment:
good expression here, looks a bit fuzzy. up the shutter to 250, which is probably the safest sync speed and will freeze your action/hand better. - then again, it might just be resized without proper sharpening.

Message edited by author 2007-07-24 13:44:13.

Andi2.jpg
by Blind_squirrel

Comment:
this is good, but her expression is hurting her again. she kinda looks pissed.

Andi1.jpg
by Blind_squirrel

Comment:
bad angle, she's looking down her nose at the viewer, say's "snob" all over it. the lighting is good, though.

Confidentially
by klorineforbrains

Comment:
the flame was unnecessary and a little out of place for me. a signet ring with a laid impression was necessary, IMO, to make the concept come together.

ashes... ashes... we all fall down
by Jutilda

Comment:
something connected with me here, and I can't explain it.

My-Trio.jpg
by Coley

Comment:
Man, I almost feel like I know your wife and kids so much with how often I've seen them. You got a lotta love for them, Cole, and that's a good way to be ;)

Hollywood Glamour
by Jaded_Housewife

Comment:
awesomeness. love the bokeh.

Balance
by Patsfan

Comment:
Holy crap kid! You've got the stuff. I wish I had found my love for Photography at 13. Great stuff!