1939 Packard, Saint Partick's Day Parade, Bergenfield, NJ
by MPRPRO

Comment by risenphoenixster:
It's a nice photo, I like the angle & the crop. The focus seems just a bit too soft.

1939 Packard, Saint Partick's Day Parade, Bergenfield, NJ
by MPRPRO

Comment by snaffles:
lovely shot of the car, like the b/w

1939 Packard, Saint Partick's Day Parade, Bergenfield, NJ
by MPRPRO

Comment by Ja-9:
very nice car...good tones

1939 Packard, Saint Partick's Day Parade, Bergenfield, NJ
by MPRPRO

Comment by retiredPhil:
Like the subject. Would have liked the glare on the hood and top reduced, and maybe the car off centered "to give it a place to go".

Subtle Sensual Seduction by Ann Marie
by MPRPRO

Comment by paulbtlw:
The point of focus is just in front of the model - it doesn't escape me that one way to remedy that would be for the viewer (camera) to move closer, thus reinforcing the meaning within the shot. Great work.

Subtle Sensual Seduction by Ann Marie
by MPRPRO

Comment by choltmeier:
Great composition... the focus is the face but you can wander around the frame and see other interesting parts. I wish there was a little more light on the face and eyes. I like the lines on the floor to pull you into thte shot. 8

Subtle Sensual Seduction by Ann Marie
by MPRPRO

Comment by srdanz:
It seems like the better lighting would be more on the face and less on the derriere?

Subtle Sensual Seduction by Ann Marie
by MPRPRO

Comment by teranb:
This could have been just as seductive without the full nudity, maybe more so.

Since you have made such a fuss, via private message, about my initial comment above, I decided to come back and give it another look. It reminds me of an early Marilyn Monroe type of shot. There is too much light on her hair and backside in the background, detracting from her face and eyes, which could be absolutely captivating if better highlighted. Perspective is nice. I have adjusted my score accordingly.

Subtle Sensual Seduction by Ann Marie
by MPRPRO

Comment by oldbimmercoupe:
title hurts this one

Subtle Sensual Seduction by Ann Marie
by MPRPRO

Comment by bjoern:
My idea is that her face should be brighter than her bottom, how it is now I find it distracting. Or have her pose in a way that bottom and feet are hidden behind her face.