All That's Left Are Pieces of Her...
by saracat

Comment by sbrian123:
Tries to hard to tug at the hearstrings.

All That's Left Are Pieces of Her...
by saracat

Comment by Yllisme:
Cool unicorn earings

Alice capstan
by saracat

Comment by sevilduvarci:
i like this, very nice portrait.

All That's Left Are Pieces of Her...
by saracat

Comment by Blackbox:
The colors are nice...I'm sure there is more to the story. I guess we'll have to wait until the voting is over to read about it.

Sailing on Wings of Gold
by saracat

Comment by PaulE:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

You certainly meet the challenge with the striking gold sail in the centre. The shot is technically sound, with nothing fundamentally wrong. There is a richness to this image that I enjoy. Others may feel that the foreground and background are too dark - I imagine this is a result of editing to get the sail just so. Unfortunately all the action in the image is in a band across the centre, and both foreground and background are pretty much dead space. The foreground in particular does not add to the image.

How to grow the vote: The composition should place more emphasis on the yachts (especially that gold sail) to really focus your audiences eye on the subject. I would have liked to have seen the yachts in the foreground (balanced accordign to the rule of thirds) with a bright blue sky in the background.

I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!

Cheers
Paul

Message edited by author 2006-08-03 21:06:43.

All That's Left Are Pieces of Her...
by saracat

Comment by starrlite:
this says so much

All That's Left Are Pieces of Her...
by saracat

Comment by heathen:
well, that's fairly depressing...nice shot, though

mom and alice1 BW
by saracat

Comment by sevilduvarci:
lighting is very nice, tones look great.

mom and alice1 BW
by saracat

Comment by Phil:
Awwww. Look at you guys. Good stuff sara.

mom and alice1 BW
by saracat

Comment by CalliopeKel:
Very tender portrait.