Green shot!
by Ecce_Signum

Comment:
We should have a standard way to comment on these things, maybe there is but I don't know about it, so my feedback is:

Shot Originality: 5
Meets Challenge "theme": 10
Composition: 7
Exposure/Post processing: 3 (blown out sky and seems slightly oversharpened and pretty heavy on saturation)
Title originality/appropriateness: 5
Avg: 6
Score: 6

my two cents. hope this is helpful.

Five Seconds After "Cheese"
by TCGuru

Comment:
A bit heavy on the sharpening. Cool poses.

Who Says You Can't Have It All
by njsabs

Comment:
This is a very nice photo. IMHO it would be a 10 if the sharpening were not as aggressive.

Will Monkeys Do?
by GeneralE

Comment:
VERY nice.

Baby Deer
by sarsonuk

Comment:
This is cute, but is it a portrait or snapshot? A polarizer for the clouds would have really helped.

Last Supper
by De Sousa

Comment:
Unlike many of the entries, your photo is actually set up and is, therefore, a real portrait. Above and beyond going above and beyond just meeting the specs, this is a great, interesting, technically spot on photograph and, hopefully, with my 10 in the mix, you will snag a ribbon with it. I really can't think of anything it needs (OK, maybe you could have lost the scissors or whatever is on the table on His right. The constraint of 640 pixels makes details like that lost).

Great work!

Symphony in Rehearsal
by banmorn

Comment:
There are so many interesting groups in this shot. People doing interesing things together in twos, threes, fours... Unfortunately that all seems lost because of the wide angle. Had you shot tele and done much smaller groups, I think you would have gotten much, much more from these people.

Yeah, im over here
by renefunk

Comment:
Although there are at least three human beings in the shot and it, therefore, technically meets the Challenge specs, there doesn't appear to be any setup (on your part) unlike many other entries that clearly are set up and so are, in my mind, portraits. To me this seems more of a snapshot than a portrait. Cute faces, though.

double mint twins are back. double the action
by kaarissaa

Comment:
I really like the "feel" of this photo. Cute poses. Too bad you lost the girl on top with the dropoff of the flash.

profiles
by sigrun_th

Comment:
VERY nice.