The Magic of Wishesby
JudiComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
The critique I am doing is for "the magic of wishes"
First Impression - the most important one:
I love it ... it took my breath away and left me wishing for more.
Composition:
Interesting use of composition. I would loved to have had more details about what you were
trying to achieve with the shot, as it helps with critiquing. Apart from that, the comments you
recieved are positive with a couple to note:
Careful with neat image, it takes away to texture if used too heavily.
Good concept and great idea!
Subject:
I like the colours ... and how you have used them to meet the challenge 100%..
Technical (Colour and light):
Well lit with good bold use of colour.
To grow its vote?:
Probably a little much in the neat image. but I really think an awesome shot .. and defiantely
was in with a chance .. I just can't figure out the one and two.
Summary:
I think this is a cool picture, well executed with only minor if any issues .. you really did do
good..
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
Photographer found comment helpful.
